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12 November 2006 @ 02:08 pm
Homecoming  
I wrote a little story for the icon challenge, and I'm going to post it here. It's very, very slightly changed, really just a word here and there, however, for the sake of historical accuracy and so you can read all the comments even though most of them just consist of a word or two indicating the commentor is leaving her computer to go masturbate now kthnx, the original version is here.

I deliberately wrote this in a way that wouldn't make it obvious I was the author since I failed rather catastrophically at that in the last challenge - it's written in the third person, it's plotless porn, and there is no banner or quote.  A small handful of you emailed me your guesses, and although I don't think anyone got it in one guess, a few of you did crack the code.

My beta informed me that my disclaimer that it was unbeta'd because she wouldn't approve of me writing smut was way off the mark. Sorry for misjudging you, Claudia! I'll post responses to the comments I've gotten over the next couple of days, here or in the challenges community, but let me just give a general thank you. I had fun writing it.

I'll post my comments and thoughts on the challenge fics shortly.
Title: Homecoming
Written By:
Xie
Timeline:
A few years post-513
Rating: NC-17
Warning: If you don’t like Justin being tied up and smacked with Brian’s belt, you might or might not like this story. It’s hard to say.
Summary: Porn. No plot. Unless “Justin’s in a bad mood” is a plot.
Author’s Notes: I’d thank my beta but she’d never forgive me for writing this piece of smut so I didn’t show it to her.
Inspired By Icon: 31

Justin came out of his studio feeling tired and a little irritated. His hand hurt, his allergies were acting up, and Brian had been away on a business trip and he hadn’t gotten laid in four days.

And speaking of Brian, he hadn’t even come into the studio when he got home, just gone straight into the media room. Which is what he did every night when he came home and Justin was working, unless he had something to tell him. Something like, “Take your clothes off and get on that table, I have to fuck your ass.” That kind of thing.

Justin went out to the media room, and there was Brian, sitting at his computer, checking the same email he’d probably checked at the airport two hours before. His priorities were clearly completely fucked.

“Hey.”

Brian looked up and saw that Justin was wearing paint-spattered sweats and a t-shirt, barefoot, and in a pissy mood. He’d debated going in and saying hi when he got home, but the throbbing anti-social beat of whatever Justin was listening to had made him decide against it. You don’t live with someone as long as Brian had lived with Justin and not learn to read the subtle cues.

Like, when Justin’s glaring at you from the doorway, you have two choices. Try to cajole and sweet talk him into a better mood, or fuck the shit out of him.

Brian wasn’t so much with the sweet talk.

“So, shitty day, dear?” He leaned back in his chair, put his arms behind his head, and raised an eyebrow.

Justin came into the room and threw himself dramatically on the sofa. “Shitty enough. How was yours?” He picked up the remote control and turned on the TV.

Brian got up, took the remote out of Justin’s hand, turned off the TV, and let it fall to the floor. He yanked his tie off over his head, reached down for Justin’s left hand, and pulled him abruptly off the sofa.

Justin lost his balance, and stumbled against Brian. Brian grinned and sat down, jerking Justin into his lap at the same time he attacked him with his mouth. He was covering him with kisses, biting and nibbling at his lower lip and his neck, roughly shoving his t-shirt up and pinching his nipples.

Justin stiffened at first, but then started kissing back, sucking Brian’s tongue into his mouth and trying to pull Brian’s shirt out of his pants.

Brian surprised him by slapping his hands away and grabbing both his wrists in one of his hands. “Stop it.”

Surprise made Justin go limp for a second, and Brian took advantage of that to pull Justin close to him, pinning his arms to his side. He went back to Justin’s throat, sucking the skin over his windpipe into his mouth. Justin felt it, sharp and painful. He let his head fall back against Brian’s shoulder, and let his knees fall apart a little, too.

“Miss me?” It was Brian’s mouth at his ear, his breath hot and his tone half amused, half mocking. Pure Brian.

Justin didn’t answer, just wriggled his arm free and tried to drag Brian’s hand between his legs. Brian laughed and started using his mouth on Justin again – he couldn’t call it kissing, because it was like he wanted to eat Justin alive, suck not just his tongue but his heart and soul right up out of his mouth. Justin twisted around, deliberately grinding his hip into Brian’s cock. Brian’s hand slipped up under his shirt again, and he gripped Justin’s nipple and pinched, hard.

Justin arched into the touch and bit Brian’s tongue.

Brian’s hand was in his hair and he pulled, forcing Justin’s head back, while Brian sucked on his mouth again. His other arm was between Justin’s legs, and he shoved his thighs apart and then cupped his balls, roughly, pressing them back against Justin’s body.

He pulled his mouth away from Justin’s, and pressed it close to his ear again. His hand kept pressing and releasing Justin’s balls. Justin tried to squirm down so he got some contact on his cock, but Brian didn’t let him move.

“Do you know what I’d do if we were upstairs in our bed?”

“No.” Justin’s voice was just a whisper. “What would you do?”

“I’d make you take all your clothes off…” The pressure on Justin’s balls got harder, and then less. Brian moved the palm of his hand so it rested on the base of Justin’s cock.

“I’d make you strip the bed down so it was just one sheet, one of the black ones. Because you look so hot against a black sheet. Then I’d make you lie down on your back.” He was grinding the heel of his hand into Justin’s cock, and Justin was thrusting up against it.

“Not on my stomach?” He could hardly get a word out.

“No, I thought about it, but I don’t want your ass tonight. I want this.” And his fist closed hard on Justin’s cock, and Justin arched into it again, while Brian’s teeth bit at his ear lobe.

“Then I’d take your arms and tie them above your head, one to each corner of the bed. Do you know why?”

Justin licked his lips. “So I couldn’t move?”

“So you can’t cover your fucking eyes, so you have to see what I do to you.”

Justin just moaned. Brian’s hand was stroking him relentlessly through his cotton sweatpants. He wanted it inside them, but Brian ignored his attempts to move his hand there. He squirmed again, frustrated.

“Do you know what I’d do then?”

Brian had relaxed his grip on Justin’s hair, so Justin shook his head. He could feel the pulse beating in his throat.

“I’d take your legs and spread them out as far as they could go, all the way until the muscles were straining. And I’d tie each ankle to the corner of the bed.”

Justin shivered, and Brian’s hand left his hair and reached down and pushed on the inside of one of his thighs, until it fell off the sofa, his foot resting on the floor. Brian’s other hand continued its assault on his cock, hard and a little hurtful through the cotton of his sweatpants.

“Then I’d take off my belt, and do you know what I’d do with it, Justin?”

Justin whimpered but didn’t answer. He didn’t even shake his head. He had his eyes closed and was pinned against Brian’s body. He could feel Brian slowly grinding into him from behind, and Brian’s hand was still rubbing against his cock, and Justin reached down again and tried to bring Brian’s hand inside his pants. But Brian slapped him away, and he let his arms fall to his sides.

“I’d take my belt and I’d drag it gently across your thighs, slowly back and forth, the tip of it, and then the whole belt. And you’d be moving, not knowing when I was going to do more than just drag it like that. I’d start just above your knees, and then I’d go up to the tops of your thighs, and then I’d start on the insides. Right where the skin is smooth and pale, Justin.

“And then I’d strap across your thighs so hard I’d leave marks, bright red welts from the edge of the belt. And you’d try to get away, but you couldn’t. You’d be wriggling and pushing back into the bed, but you'd know you couldn't get away, I’d just keep hitting you, keep marking you with it…”

Justin was writhing on Brian now, his ass pressing back in rhythm with Brian’s hand gripping him, Brian’s cock thrusting up.

“And then I’d slash across the tops of your thighs, and then the insides again, crossing over the marks I’d already made, and then I’d stop.”

Brian’s hand stilled on Justin’s cock, and Justin moaned and put his hand on Brian’s, trying to move it.

Brian’s licked at Justin’s ear. His voice was a harsh whisper now. “Then I’d start just dragging the belt again, Justin, but not just on your thighs anymore. I’d trail it across your cock… your cock that’s leaked all over your stomach, and I’d drag the belt through the wetness, and spread it all over your chest and thighs, and then back to your cock. Back and forth, gently letting it touch the tip, pick up more pre-come, up to your nipples….” And Brian pinched Justin’s nipples again, but gently this time, and started rubbing Justin’s cock through his pants again.

“Then I’d start on your thighs, then back to your cock, letting the belt trace so slowly across it, you pulling on the restraints that have you tied to the bed, pushing your hips up as much as you can, figuring out then why I spread your legs so far… because I’m trailing the belt over your balls, and from your balls to your cock and back again.

“And then I'd pick up the belt and lash it down one… time… hard… across… your… cock.”

Justin gasped and came against Brian’s hand, the hot flow gushing out of his cock and soaking his pants, Brian shoving up under him and biting down on his neck.

Justin lay across Brian, his leg still sprawled off the sofa, his heart pounding. Brian gently slid back until he was sitting up, and pulled Justin with him. Justin turned to face him, curling against him, burying his face in his neck.

“Fuck.”

Brian chuckled. “Feeling better?”

Justin nodded. “Yeah. Ummm, welcome home.”
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[identity profile] flamencanyc.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 10:14 pm (UTC)
My beta informed me that my disclaimer that it was unbeta'd because she wouldn't approve of me writing smut was way off the mark.

LOL! I noticed that none of them screamed Xie, but the fact that you said that in your notes was part of the reason why I thought that Homecoming, among the several best written stories, might have been yours!
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[identity profile] flamencanyc.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 10:18 pm (UTC)
p.s. Not because I thought Claudia wouldn't approve, but because I could totally see you saying that. ;)
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[identity profile] justinlovesart.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 10:23 pm (UTC)
Good :)
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[identity profile] justinlovesart.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 10:23 pm (UTC)
But why? Do I really come across as strait-laced?

When I don't beta Xie's masterpiece, I do nothing else but recommend stories where people are tied-up and bound!

The fact that I love Justin is the main reason why I love this story. He is having the time of his life and this can only make me happy :)
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[identity profile] flamencanyc.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 10:41 pm (UTC)
Do I really come across as strait-laced?

As I said, not at all! It's just that her respect for you seems to know no bounds -- bonds are a whole other story ;) -- and she tends to be pretty humble about the brilliance of her writing, so I could see her being a bit hesitant about this, if only semi-seriously. Did that make any sense?

When I don't beta Xie's masterpiece, I do nothing else but recommend stories where people are tied-up and bound!

Pass along any good ones you find to me anytime! I'm a slut for that sort of thing. ;)
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[identity profile] roc-abs.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 12:27 am (UTC)
But why? Do I really come across as strait-laced?

The funny thing is ... I did guess it, but the thing that almost threw me off was the comment about the beta not approving. Having read some of the Conquerer stuff that Claudia recommends, I could not reconcile that with the comment ;)
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 01:03 am (UTC)
Oh, I guess in a way I thought Claudia would consider it frivolous, not just porny.
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:11 am (UTC)
Yeah, that header seems to have tipped off a few people. I have to be MUCH more careful next time!

And thank you!
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[identity profile] flamencanyc.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:16 am (UTC)
No darling, thank you!
(and I it just took me a minute or two to figure out how to breathe again after seeing your icon! Guh.)
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[identity profile] jittrbugg.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 10:24 pm (UTC)
I love this. And I also love the fact that it's kinda different from your other stuff. You do it perfectly well too! Still beautifully written. Still hot.
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:06 am (UTC)
Thanks... I enjoyed writing it, even if it's not my usual kind of story. I'm glad you liked it.
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[identity profile] chering.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 11:39 pm (UTC)
You had me completely fooled. I pegged "The Lamest Most Half Assed Plan in the Universe" for yours!
I'm pathetic at guessing. This one along with three others from the challenge made my favorites.
This line clinched it for me.

“No, I thought about it, but I don’t want your ass tonight. I want this.” And his fist closed hard on Justin’s cock"

Yes, please. I couldn't agree with you more Brian.

This whole fic was SO incredibly hot. Would you please teach a class on how to write smut?
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:07 am (UTC)
LOL, thank you! I also very much enjoyed the story you wrote with fansee this time - it was one of my favorites.
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[identity profile] lunachickk.livejournal.com on November 12th, 2006 11:54 pm (UTC)
guh-huh...
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:08 am (UTC)
Yeah, I got a lot of that. ;)

THANK YOU!
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[identity profile] jillapet.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 12:13 am (UTC)
Guh...

*off to masturbate, k?*
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:08 am (UTC)
LOL, oh if you MUST!

Thank you!
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[identity profile] vlredreign.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 01:32 am (UTC)
Yeah, I admit it, it took me three guesses. And yeah, it's cause you deliberately took a small departure. But after I re-read the three suspects, your voice spoke to me. Wanna know where?

Something like, “Take your clothes off and get on that table, I have to fuck your ass.”

That was you. That's what tipped me. I think I told you that when I emailed you. And darlin, it was, and still is, so fucking hot. There's something to be said for sex, but this and two stories written in the HP fandom are tops of my list for non-sex sex. Just that thing about someone telling you what they're gonna do to you, without touching you...holy shit. Even when you don't intend it, you rock my socks with your voice.
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:09 am (UTC)
THANK YOU! I loved writing it, even if it was a little off from my usual thing. And I'm glad I managed to fool everyone, at least briefly.
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[identity profile] hydrangeaceae.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 02:56 am (UTC)
I failed to comment when this might have meant something, but this was the only challenge fic of which I thought I knew the author - because of the header on it, actually. And the hotness/quality/etc, but that came later. Normally this is where I would say something about how much I like your characterization or plot twist or humor but I have to say here - I think the most relavent thing to say is that, ummmm yeah, hot. (No objections to plotless porn here.)

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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 13th, 2006 04:10 am (UTC)
LOL, yeah, hard to comment on the plot when there is, ummm... none at all.

A lot of people said they thought it was mine from the header. Something else I have to watch out for in the next challenge. ;)

THANK YOU!

Xie
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 14th, 2006 05:03 am (UTC)
LOL, no, you didn't comment.... and I'm glad you liked it. Like, really seriously glad. THANK YOU!
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[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_alicesprings/ on November 14th, 2006 10:05 am (UTC)
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HOLY MOTHER OF GOD THIS IS HOT!

It was very remiss of me not to comment earlier dear wife. I. Loved. It.

Hot and a little funny and a little sweet.

And speaking of Brian, he hadn’t even come into the studio when he got home, just gone straight into the media room. Which is what he did every night when he came home and Justin was working, unless he had something to tell him. Something like, “Take your clothes off and get on that table, I have to fuck your ass.” That kind of thing.

Justin went out to the media room, and there was Brian, sitting at his computer, checking the same email he’d probably checked at the airport two hours before. His priorities were clearly completely fucked.


Brill. Poor horny unfucked Justin and the dirty talk and the visuals and the coming on command. Guhhh.
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 15th, 2006 05:45 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it, dear wife! I had fun writing it. :)

Thank you for doing the challenges!!!!
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[identity profile] paddies.livejournal.com on November 14th, 2006 10:37 am (UTC)
My brain was a big pile of guh when I commented the first time so I forgot to ask...can I archive it? :-)
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 15th, 2006 05:44 am (UTC)
Of course, thank you!
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[identity profile] on-the-ground.livejournal.com on November 16th, 2006 08:55 pm (UTC)
Awesome.. thanx!! :)
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[identity profile] xie-xie-xie.livejournal.com on November 16th, 2006 09:03 pm (UTC)
Thank YOU! Glad you liked it!
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[identity profile] rapunzel50.livejournal.com on November 18th, 2006 12:08 pm (UTC)
Have been so busy (and slack) and this is the only challenge fic I have read so far - must always go for a quality product if you have a time restraint (I said restraint lol)!!!
Fantastic, as always, I (am greedy) would like it to be even longer...but I guess I can imagine that part!
Thanks for this diversion (now go write Risks!!!) *grins and hugs*
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[identity profile] iamastarin2006.livejournal.com on October 30th, 2007 03:14 am (UTC)
Dam you can write one like this anytime you would like that was hot.

thx : kaylin
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