ext_70150 ([identity profile] arrowthroughme.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xie_xie_xie 2007-01-28 02:25 pm (UTC)

I played with his hair, and when I heard his breathing get slow and deep, I closed my eyes.

Perfect ending for me.

I turned my lips in, and took a breath. I waited for my throat to relax and let some words out. “You really don’t suck even a little.”

And that's so dead on Brian ... I could purr I'm that content that you have been able to let them develop and manage to let them be themselves at the same time. I know I've told you this repeatedly but for me it's this fact that makes this universe so strong and authentic. Every chapter is pure pleasure to read and leaves me with this little fluffy feeling in the pit of my stomach for half the day.

There wasn’t really anything Justin could have said to me that would have changed how I felt. There was still something simultaneously icy and hot inside my chest when I thought about the last year. I still didn’t really understand why he’d come back. And I felt that way even though I knew, really knew, that Justin loved me.

Kind of universal this kind of wonder and reluctance to really grasp why one is loved and sought out. And Brian just shows his human and has learned that one has to live with these thoughts, just like the rest of us...

This whole chapter has left me warm and it's a perfect ending and ,yes, I also sighed in relief that this will go on. You realize that we all depend on this universe by now and need our fix...
Seriously this whole series has blown me away, because of its sheer brilliance on so many levels. I adore the dialogues as they are so in character and I madly love the fact that they have managed to give themselves this gift of total commitment, especially because it comes with their individuals flavours and is thus completely unique as it is theirs and can never be anyone else's.
Maybe that about covers Brian's goal to set out to be the best homosexual one can be. It certainly has happened for me in this story.

A heartfelt thank you! ♥
Nicki






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