They'll discuss it a little more in the next chapter.
Well, "discuss" might be too strong a word for them.
Sounds good. And yes, I wasn't going to expect a literal discussion. ;)
//My second favorite moment from all of your fic chapters.//
But tell me... what is number one??
Ashdkljssakljdf!!!! (Believe me, I don't cry. Not at romances, not at extremo sad films, not at RL tragedies, and on and on. I just don't. But this scene got to me, and I sat in my desk chair and was a wibbly mess while reading it, and I absolutely fell in love with it.)
Let me add that it takes place immediately after the hottest phone sex ever kthx. *combusts*
“I wish you were here.” I wanted him to hold me.
“Me, too.”
..I shifted the phone to my other hand, and wrapped my arm around myself, tucking my hand under my cheek. I could feel my hair brush against the back of my fingers.
“When I was here before, when I was living here, I couldn’t sleep a lot of nights. It was really hot, and I missed you, and I’d lie there sometimes and pretend you were holding me.”
I stopped talking for a minute, because I suddenly felt my throat close up and my eyes and nose start to burn. Brian didn’t say anything, but I could hear him breathing softly.
“Sometimes I’d touch my hair and pretend it was you touching it.” I probably shouldn’t have told him that.
DEAD. Just...OMG. So sad and full of love and beautifully simple and honest and real, and can I marry that last line?
*coughs* I guess I didn't have to quote that whole thing, I could've just told you which scene it was...but that's less fun.
Ok, that's all for now. ;-)
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