ext_2971 ([identity profile] silent-seas.livejournal.com) wrote on January 17th, 2007 at 10:00 pm
Re: rambly feedback, part 6
They'll discuss it a little more in the next chapter.

Well, "discuss" might be too strong a word for them.


Sounds good. And yes, I wasn't going to expect a literal discussion. ;)

//My second favorite moment from all of your fic chapters.//

But tell me... what is number one??


Ashdkljssakljdf!!!! (Believe me, I don't cry. Not at romances, not at extremo sad films, not at RL tragedies, and on and on. I just don't. But this scene got to me, and I sat in my desk chair and was a wibbly mess while reading it, and I absolutely fell in love with it.)

Let me add that it takes place immediately after the hottest phone sex ever kthx. *combusts*

“I wish you were here.” I wanted him to hold me.

“Me, too.”

..I shifted the phone to my other hand, and wrapped my arm around myself, tucking my hand under my cheek. I could feel my hair brush against the back of my fingers.

“When I was here before, when I was living here, I couldn’t sleep a lot of nights. It was really hot, and I missed you, and I’d lie there sometimes and pretend you were holding me.”

I stopped talking for a minute, because I suddenly felt my throat close up and my eyes and nose start to burn. Brian didn’t say anything, but I could hear him breathing softly.

“Sometimes I’d touch my hair and pretend it was you touching it.” I probably shouldn’t have told him that.


DEAD. Just...OMG. So sad and full of love and beautifully simple and honest and real, and can I marry that last line?

*coughs* I guess I didn't have to quote that whole thing, I could've just told you which scene it was...but that's less fun.

Ok, that's all for now. ;-)
 
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