Really beautiful, provocative and engaging. Once I got into your story, I just could not look away. I couldn;t put it down. The way you described Brian's angst, his conflict, the way it manifests physically- was really perfect, so believable. I ending was like a breath of fresh air, like a much needed sigh. You wrapped it all up, bringing together all of the romantic elements. Really beautiful.
For a long time, I have really been wanting to read about Brian and Justin as their relationship age. But not just in terms of plot, but more in terms of their relationship dynamic. And I think you have really done this. And I love it because you show their challenges, their meaness, their passion, their confusion, their day to day... and even with all of that, they remain Brian and Justin: OTP.
I feel tearful, engaged, fulfilled, and complete with your telling of their story.
The section about why Justin was the wife... was fucking brilliant. And the ending, how you pulled it all together was also inspired.
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!
(btw: Justin really should be doing MUCH better with his nightmares and insomnia. I think he is not taking his herbs properly. I also think Brian could clearly use some form of treatment, massage, acupuncture, some body work, that would allow his stress and tension to be released from his body and psyche. They don't have to suffer so much. JMO.:)
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Once I got into your story, I just could not look away. I couldn;t put it down.
The way you described Brian's angst, his conflict, the way it manifests physically- was really perfect, so believable.
I ending was like a breath of fresh air, like a much needed sigh.
You wrapped it all up, bringing together all of the romantic elements.
Really beautiful.
For a long time, I have really been wanting to read about Brian and Justin as their relationship age. But not just in terms of plot, but more in terms of their relationship dynamic. And I think you have really done this. And I love it because you show their challenges, their meaness, their passion, their confusion, their day to day... and even with all of that, they remain Brian and Justin: OTP.
I feel tearful, engaged, fulfilled, and complete with your telling of their story.
The section about why Justin was the wife... was fucking brilliant.
And the ending, how you pulled it all together was also inspired.
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!
(btw: Justin really should be doing MUCH better with his nightmares and insomnia. I think he is not taking his herbs properly. I also think Brian could clearly use some form of treatment, massage, acupuncture, some body work, that would allow his stress and tension to be released from his body and psyche. They don't have to suffer so much. JMO.:)