Well, you and Plum are the only ones I'll give such detailed feedback for, 1. Cos your work is fucking brilliant, and 2. It makes me so happy that giving lots of feedback is the only way I can say thank you. Silly as it is. I live for the fic, so I'm glad to help if you live for the feedback!

Well I shall wait for Part 2, fingers crossed you'll be able to post before she goes away, but if not, it's definitely worth the wait! ♥