So um, have you written the other parts of this and now you're just stringing us along? Or do I have to pretend to wait patiently for the next part until it's written?

First, let me thank you for taking the time to do this level of feedback. I live for it, and I also know that I never did it, so I know why most people don't. And yet, I live for it. Did I mention that?

I don't have the whole story complete. What I have is an outline, with some sections full written, a few things I'd written for Plans that may or may not make it into here, and the revised PWP I almost posted as a standalone, but which my friend Travis figured out how I could use in this with a couple very minor changes.

My beta is going away next week so I'm going to try very hard to finish Chapter 2 before she goes. She'll only be offline a few days, so if I could post Chapter 2 before she leaves, the timing would be perfect. But we'll have to see.

So anyway, yeah, thanks for the feedback. Did I mention I live for it?