I love the way your POV's build the story...you handle them masterfully without having us backtrack unnecessarily.
I think Brian discussing personal "stuff" with Ted makes so much sense. Brian & Ted make excellent friends, but for Brian to venture into the uncharted waters seeking Ted's advice seems quite a major step forward. Of course, he wouldn't have done it without some serious alcohol in his bloodstream.
I love the lines from Ted (BTW--An excellent Ted voice):
Brian, you need to talk this over with Justin...when the blood levels in your alcohol have risen Perfect & funny--soooo Ted
I also loved: Although everyone already knows at the end.
Outstanding continuation! I look forward to seeing the direction you decide to take this topic and keep it IC. :D
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I love the way your POV's build the story...you handle them masterfully without having us backtrack unnecessarily.
I think Brian discussing personal "stuff" with Ted makes so much sense. Brian & Ted make excellent friends, but for Brian to venture into the uncharted waters seeking Ted's advice seems quite a major step forward. Of course, he wouldn't have done it without some serious alcohol in his bloodstream.
I love the lines from Ted (BTW--An excellent Ted voice):
Brian, you need to talk this over with Justin...when the blood levels in your alcohol have risen Perfect & funny--soooo Ted
I also loved: Although everyone already knows at the end.
Outstanding continuation! I look forward to seeing the direction you decide to take this topic and keep it IC. :D