Just finished watching the series for the first time, and asked my flist for great B/J fics, and this was the first one someone pointed me to. I'm so glad they did.

You've got such a great grasp on the characters, and I love your choice of alternating Mel and Justin entries, and how clear their voices are.

And I just have to gush over the scene with Brian bottoming, and the talk about not using condoms. So many people don't seem to get those aspects right, but the details you give both times show that it's more than a momentary thought, that there's reasons behind their reactions that just makes their actions so much more powerful. Made me hold my breath both times. :D

I just loved it. Off to read Decisions!