That was f*cking great! I love how you write. I love how you pulled it all together. I love how it all worked out and how I howled with laughter. (When I do that the dogs look at me strangely.)
You have a wonderful way of adding a punch to the end of a paragraph.
Where to begin? My favs:
"...some fat-free turkey bacon, the only kind of bacon Brian allowed me to bring into the house. I fried it in butter, though. "
"Gus just nodded and snapped the android’s head off and looked inside it."
"I seemed to remember encouraging Lindsay to talk and open up more. I must have been drunk."
Oh hell, you know them all - you wrote it. Thanks you so much. So happy it is now complete, but sad to see it end.
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masterMistress!That was f*cking great! I love how you write. I love how you pulled it all together. I love how it all worked out and how I howled with laughter. (When I do that the dogs look at me strangely.)
You have a wonderful way of adding a punch to the end of a paragraph.
Where to begin? My favs:
"...some fat-free turkey bacon, the only kind of bacon Brian allowed me to bring into the house. I fried it in butter, though. "
"Gus just nodded and snapped the android’s head off and looked inside it."
"I seemed to remember encouraging Lindsay to talk and open up more. I must have been drunk."
Oh hell, you know them all - you wrote it.
Thanks you so much. So happy it is now complete, but sad to see it end.