ext_70150 ([identity profile] arrowthroughme.livejournal.com) wrote on June 17th, 2006 at 05:59 pm
Just loved this one right from the start. Can't even recall how I found this wonderful story but I have checked your journal every day.

I mainly loved that you managed to imply that this plan would work throughout the story. Justin's thoughts had this positive vibe to it and - for me - this really worked so well. Ever since the end of the show I cling to these kind of stories that make me think positive about their future and I loved how you delicately nurtured their trust in each other, despite the obstacles. This is how the whole thing should have played out. I couldn't believe how manipulative Lindsay was being, especially because I don't really think that the writers particularly viewed her as such. One of the things that always annoyed me was this fact that somehow Lindsay was also responsible for making sure Brian would second guess everything, holding Justin back bla, bla... I always thought that she especially clung to her idea of Brian, this no compromise guy who lived the way she probably wanted to but never dared to. Nobody was ever ready to say good-bye to this Brian and also to take Justin seriously, a guy, young - so what - who has been in love for years and never wavered really when it came to Brian. so I was really glad to see someone pick up on this. i can only hope Brian will get through with all this in your sequel - wow ! - He should have the guts to try being exclusive and to do everything all the others say they can't do.

Thanks for giving me your kind of Justin who managed to stand his ground, I always saw him like this, he's my fave, will always be my fave.

This has been such an awesome journey, is this really your first fic? Excellent and thank you. I really hope you will go on. And I like the way you included every character in the story, too.

You made my day!
Nicki
 
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