If I go to list all the things I liked this comment will be ridiculously long. I liked the family element. I loved having Brian and Justin actually talking. I liked having Brian act like he was in actual physical pain from saying, "I love you" and then insisting that it must be followed by a fuck. I liked Gus going crazy for Christmas. I liked Brian casually showing Justin his second Christmas present.

I love the way you write Mel and how she relates to Brian and Lindsay. Her comments about overloading on baby cuteness were great. I always thought the character had potential.