Where was teh hot lesbo sex? I wanna read it. I'll just pretend they're oother, non-annoying people.
Yeah... I wrote it, but cut it, even from the "optional" category, because there was no time in this story I felt Mel and Lindz would have had sex in the way I wrote it. It's a uh..... spanking!Lindsay scene. I originally wrote a scene in which Mel and Lindsay have a fairly intense confrontation in the bedroom, Melanie leaves to check on Jenny after the baby monitor makes mewling sounds, and comes back and Lindsay is pretending to be asleep to avoid continuing the discussion and Melanie shows her why she shouldn't pretend.
Oh dear, I'm getting ummm... hmmmm. I may need to go re-read that now.
I'm not entirely sure what I'll do with it, the next story is in the POV of Brian and Justin, no lesbians, so I'll either share it with anyone who wants some PWP about the girls, or save it for another future story. I don't want to decide tonight.
Re: eljays character limit sux
Yeah... I wrote it, but cut it, even from the "optional" category, because there was no time in this story I felt Mel and Lindz would have had sex in the way I wrote it. It's a uh..... spanking!Lindsay scene. I originally wrote a scene in which Mel and Lindsay have a fairly intense confrontation in the bedroom, Melanie leaves to check on Jenny after the baby monitor makes mewling sounds, and comes back and Lindsay is pretending to be asleep to avoid continuing the discussion and Melanie shows her why she shouldn't pretend.
Oh dear, I'm getting ummm... hmmmm. I may need to go re-read that now.
I'm not entirely sure what I'll do with it, the next story is in the POV of Brian and Justin, no lesbians, so I'll either share it with anyone who wants some PWP about the girls, or save it for another future story. I don't want to decide tonight.