ext_56128 ([identity profile] llandaffaz.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xie_xie_xie 2006-06-17 08:40 am (UTC)

Part two:

“I did see my daughter being walked around the room on Hunter’s shoulders, with her hands grabbing at his hair while she squealed.
Oooo.....Hunter got a mention. I love Hunter and he features so little in fanfic. I guess turning out straight didn't help his popularity with slash writers. :/

“I love you.” He looked like he was going to choke. “Jesus Christ, Brian, does that cause you actual physical pain or just severe psychological distress?” He heaved up off the sofa and dumped me on the floor, then stuck his hand out. I took it. “What the fuck was that for?” “We have to go upstairs.” “How come?” “Because you’ve caused me severe psychological distress and actual physical pain, which makes me need to fuck you, and I don’t want the kids to see that.” “So every time you say you love me, we have to fuck?” “Yeah.” That sounded like a plan .
I tried to only quote part of this, but really it's just the whole part that works so well. Brilliantly concluded.

But I do want more. Now that you've shown your hand, so to speak, don't think you can rest on your laurels without being hounded on a regular basis.

Surely there's a 'spanking' story (or several?) inside you just begging to be spread forth across a page. ;)

Seriously, thanks for a wonderful fic. You are appreciated very much.

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