ext_56086 ([identity profile] cherrygurl31.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xie_xie_xie 2006-10-20 04:02 pm (UTC)

feeling him open up and widen and then, finally, rise up all the way onto his knees. Which he never, ever did unless he wanted me to fuck him.
GUH!! It's so friggin hot when Justin gets to top!!

Brian was half turned away from me, looking out the window. His shoulders looked tense. "I told you."

I was totally lost by this. "When?"

"In this house. I told you."

"To marry me? Brian."

I LOOOOVE how you write Brian, Xie!!! :)

Brian and Justin went to Debbie’s in Justin’s new car, but Lindz and I took our car since it had the baby seats in it already. Besides, it would be easier for Brian to blow Justin while he drove without me and Lindz and the kids watching.
This is SOOOO Melanie! lol You have really nailed the characters!

Lindsay threw her hands up in the air. "He was NOT there, Brian. Michael told me and Mel that Justin didn't show up at the opening night of Babylon. What, was he in disguise?"

"He was at the house, where I asked him to be. So that his and my FUCKING SHIT could be kept out of the firing range of all our FRIENDS AND FUCKING FAMILY."

Way to go, Brian!!! :) I love how Brian defends his relationship with Justin!

She did something to Justin, not you. She’s apologizing to him, not you.”

Silence.

“Unless you think she needs to apologize to you for hurting you by hurting him? I mean, talk about being a lesbianic twat.”

“Fuck you.”

ONLY Mel has the balls to put Brian in his place. I love it!! :)


Xie, you did an AWESOME job with this chapter!! I loved all the interactions between everyone. And like I said before, you have nailed all these characters!! :)









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