Oh! Hahahaha! I applaud you, that was wonderful!

The dialog and interaction between Brian and Justin is so entertaining in this fic! OMG, like this part...

"OK, that’s good, but don’t totally stop talking. You know, once a year or so is fine."

"Like how often you let me fuck you? We'll have a conversation then too?"

"That sounds like a little too much stress for me in one day."

I smacked him. "STRESS? The greatest sexual experience of your life and you call it STRESS?"

Just... *dead* so funny, on so many levels. And it's like that throughout the fic!

I also loved that you chose Justin POV and Melanie POV. They are so opposite, it's perfect for showing the whole story!

I am so excited to read the next part!