One of my closest friends is a blonde, and she absolutely hates blonde jokes, but I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed Mel's numerous referances to a blond/e conspiracy *giggles* Actually, I just love your Mel in general, because she makes everything so darn funny without ever going OOC.
So I made a decision and climbed onto the bed and bounced right up to his face and said “Brian! Wake up! I’m going to STARVE!”
This line is just so effin' adorable that I ended up squeeing and giggling at the same time, and nearly snorted out a tonsil ^_^
"When did you turn into a lesbian?"
"When you started acting like a twat."
That must be, like, the most profound exchange I've ever heard in all my years of fanfic reading.
I have to say, though, that I think your Lindsay might be a teensy bit too anti-BJ than the one in the show. At least, in the show she was not so obviously so, but I whole-heartedly agree with the unrequited-love-for-Brian thing, and I especially like the implication that her resentment is at least partly due to a feeling that Justin shouldn't get Brian because she didn't.
“That’s different.”
“Yes, it is. Brian loves Justin back.”
After that, I was thinking: SCORE! ^_^ I like your Lindz, anyway, especially since she agrees to bring Gus back to his Dada ♥
Last, but most definitely not least, the SEX. Oh man, you do the sex scenes so well, several times I've had to resist clearing out the room so that I can have some, erm, private time to absorb the glorious hotness that is excellently written B/J lovin' *g* Decisions is understandably more sex-intensive than Plans, because of the whole no-condom thing, but you demonstrate in this fic that you are able to put together just the right mixture of smut and plot to leave your readers extremely happy.
Anyway, THANK YOU for starting Desires, had several days of worrying over whether or not there'd be a sequel there. I will try to comment on every chapter of that, but I apologise in advance if it turns out that I won't have time to. Know that I'm a very big fan of your writing, and I honestly think that your work needs a class of its own in the QAF fandom. Thank you so much for sharing it!!!
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One of my closest friends is a blonde, and she absolutely hates blonde jokes, but I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed Mel's numerous referances to a blond/e conspiracy *giggles* Actually, I just love your Mel in general, because she makes everything so darn funny without ever going OOC.
So I made a decision and climbed onto the bed and bounced right up to his face and said “Brian! Wake up! I’m going to STARVE!”
This line is just so effin' adorable that I ended up squeeing and giggling at the same time, and nearly snorted out a tonsil ^_^
"When did you turn into a lesbian?"
"When you started acting like a twat."
That must be, like, the most profound exchange I've ever heard in all my years of fanfic reading.
I have to say, though, that I think your Lindsay might be a teensy bit too anti-BJ than the one in the show. At least, in the show she was not so obviously so, but I whole-heartedly agree with the unrequited-love-for-Brian thing, and I especially like the implication that her resentment is at least partly due to a feeling that Justin shouldn't get Brian because she didn't.
“That’s different.”
“Yes, it is. Brian loves Justin back.”
After that, I was thinking: SCORE! ^_^ I like your Lindz, anyway, especially since she agrees to bring Gus back to his Dada ♥
Last, but most definitely not least, the SEX. Oh man, you do the sex scenes so well, several times I've had to resist clearing out the room so that I can have some, erm, private time to absorb the glorious hotness that is excellently written B/J lovin' *g* Decisions is understandably more sex-intensive than Plans, because of the whole no-condom thing, but you demonstrate in this fic that you are able to put together just the right mixture of smut and plot to leave your readers extremely happy.
Anyway, THANK YOU for starting Desires, had several days of worrying over whether or not there'd be a sequel there. I will try to comment on every chapter of that, but I apologise in advance if it turns out that I won't have time to. Know that I'm a very big fan of your writing, and I honestly think that your work needs a class of its own in the QAF fandom. Thank you so much for sharing it!!!